Found Close Up by theogroen on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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Dear Theo Groen,

Hi. I like this piece. One has little fear to be up close and personal, even if she may humbly seem a little bit tired, as if the imperfections do not define an angel, for the magic within DOES. The color and magic is in this piece. Now let's discuss possibly professional tid-bits.

Her shape gets a little lost in the perspective. It is almost as if her lower body is the hand holding her, which could be found as strange in a non-positive way. I also want a bit of dirty and grunge where the light on her hand is in terms of faded -- I mean, really subtle fade that is lit and subtely lit by the colors of the scene. The piece reads. The perspectve could defintely be seen as a 'new' or 'next' or 'classic' thing. Maybe branch off of this perspective and master it. Because it connects with people one would believe. Close-ups are hard, especially like this piece you know.

Ratings are relative with whether this piece 'works.' ^_^. ><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title=" (Smile)"/> /wave.

Sincerfrovely Paul Slice
www.ohmahn.com