Kanto by Tovato on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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You did well, but not as much of the idea of it. Be the very best by been you. Now, nothing wrong. You artist was great, full of emotion and power, full of life and energy. But you are only human, so make that the best thing. Now, my writing and artist was, well, "not good". But, you are amazing because you are still human. To be human means to be flaw my it. But also, been human means that you are the most bless my it as well. But, person will say other. Anyway, great job on the idea and the hope of it.