Tuulenkarvaine by Tuonenkalla on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

The two kestrels are cute.

The idea with the rainbow color is interesting,

I like the rainbow effect in the middle best.

( It has a mystical marbling on the dark background )

The falcons have a strong contrast, due to the white outer lines - I like, this. And that they fight in realistic proportions, but in a rainbow fight you could also worked abstractly, to get more swing lines.

In my opinion, the dark background doesn't fit, or it's too much,.. the lower edge could be left free to get more scenario. Maybe day & night. Or cold season against warm.

Also it might be interesting to see where the rainbow from the wings ends, (picture is a bit too cut off in my opinion) would be great to see the outlets fades.

Overall successful, I find these white light effects (sprinklers) in the rainbow color stylish. (You have also used them in other pictures) You could do more of them. You paint very well. That orange-brown tone in the wings, really nice.

"Interesting that it is evening sky, they must be fighting for the food."

.. or do they dance?