Ivy and Aphmau [Remake NEW VERSION] by TwiheartK on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Criticism time!: I like this, you got the swords just right and the colors on point, but the particles on aphmau are too much, the hands kinda look like claws, the blown up core should be right under and right next to ivy, her "armour" looks like a shirt and pants, their faced are looking at us when they should be looking at each other, and the circle tool isn't so good for making heads unless you are making ppg, the tear doesn't look like a tear at all, the shirt on aphmau is supposed to be ripped a little and legs don't bend like that and she didn't bend her legs in the scene, the wings don't look like wings at all, they weren't on a green hill they were in a rocky pathway, they aren't holding their swords right and the mouth and eyes on ivy are too much usage on the curve tool and the hair isn't correct, other than that it's a good picture.