Line-Art Comish - Faded Crimson by TwilightSaint on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Okay I've haven't done these very much so bear with me if I get any of this wrong

This is actually an overall beautiful drawing, I really love the lines! The only thing that seems a bit off to me is the head/neck. It just looks a tad smaller and cut off from the rest of the body. The necks of animals or any creature really connects with the chest then to belly, here it looks as if the chest is a bit missing and all I see is 2 shoulder blades and neck connecting.

The vision part, I would give a 3.5 stars. The anatomy is very nice and looks like the dragons is enjoying himself, not too tense but still has a nice relaxed look to him and his body features.

For originality, a solid 3 stars. I see a bit of flying dragons in a pose like this often but every one is different in their own way!

Technique, 4.5 stars. I really love the lines and the varying light and heavy lining to it. The texture is also very nice too! The gradient look to the colors sends a nice sense of warmth to the whole drawing and it gives a nice shading to the dragon itself!

The impact I would give another 4.5 on. The coloring and feel to the whole drawing is very warm and has a carefree feel to it!

All in all this is a very gorgeous drawing, keep it up!