.........yamete......nghhh.......baka.... by Usagi-Moni on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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hey, it's great! i mean the coloring.. amazing!
but with the drawing, i think you need to make the male look more like a male.. i think his neck is too thin and his shoulders not quite broad. but yeah, i can see that with his figure, it made him look more cute.. also, the placing of his cat ears, I'm not quite convinced with it, and i really dunno why... the color of the eyes does not fit his hair or i think his hair is not quite right with his eyes... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)"/>
but with your great coloring that i can't reach, it's awesome!<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

thumbs up!