commission - Alysandir 3 by veroro on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

I like that you are trying to incorporate movement, and theme. I like your color choice, the tones are warm. The stance she is standing feels a little awkward. It feels like she may fall forward, maybe it’s the angle she is verses the angle of the ground and her leg. Some of your other works that you incorporate movement, the angle is head on, or there isn’t a solid back ground, i.e. fav.me/d6z44hi or fav.me/d7b66w5. This one feels like you are trying something more adventurous, and I like it. You show your growth in it! Your shadows are pretty clean, on the female character, but the male feels flat with the monsters shadow. Also, I don’t know how much of a shadow the female would cast being in the shade of the monster. Over all, this image shows you trying to reach out of your element, and try something harder. I really hope you keep at it! Your work keeps getting better with each piece!