NM - Her Sister's Light WIP 2 by Wildnature03 on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

I guess I'll critique this version since it's the latest WIP. Hope that's okay. I love seeing how much your drawing style has evolved since I first started watching you in 2007.

Like ~callisto-chan said in her critique, my first thought was wedding dress, probably because the ribbons in her hair made me think of a veil and the fact that she's kneeling. I think you met your goal. The dress is gorgeous.

The pose seems rather stiff, especially because her arm is perfectly vertical, though I know you said you didn't focus on that too much. Also, I notice that when you scan line art to be colored, the line art looks very pixelated, which contrasts with your smooth coloring style. I don't know if this is on purpose or not, but such sharp line art isn't necessary if you use a program that has layers.

What I like most about this drawing, aside from the dress, is her soft expression and slight tilt of her head. They make her seem very serene. I can't wait to see the finished drawing. :3