Serios sight by WingedWilly on DeviantArt (original) (raw)

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oh.. wait.. let me put my post in a critique if I may XD
Sorry I didnt realize before that I ca. Never did one btw >.<

This is a very detailed drawing^^ I like it^^
Lighting and glow is something one doeasnt have to say much as its great as always XD What I like here especially is that the glow of the headfins illuminate his head^^ the face is not as bright as the back of his head, fitting to the glowing fins^^
The scarf is in great persepectives^^ It looks real 3D XD Espcially because of the fact that the front seems to be closer then Flays head^^

One thing I like extreamly well in this are the eyes^^ They are so detailed^^ Looking nearly alive^^ you can see the lines in the iris^^ and together wiht the whole mimik of his face.. its great XD Only bugger I would add here is.. the pupils are to large in my opinion >.< Two reasons: First: large pupils have a cute efect, but you wanted to make a serious look here. I am not a mastre of mimiks >.< but I would have drawn the pupils only half teh size you did. Second: Pupils enlargen if there is little light, but Flay's head fins give of a bright glow. It.. jsut looks a bit unnatural to me if his poupils are so large while his headfins glow like that >.<
Thought, again, I'm no specialist or master here >.<

The other favourite part of this drawing of yours is teh headband^^ Naturally teh glow of the fins is wonderfully made^^ but what I like here this time is that you cansee Flay's headshape this time^^ and especially that he is carrying the band partly over his headfins^^. you dont only see this because their base peaks out beneath them but also because of the shading, that gives the band it's from^^ It fits so well to his head^^

Btw XD the serious look of the picture.. you got it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> wonderfully^^