Clever Disguise (original) (raw)

Wrote another fic today. I was feeling rather inspired. Here we go... are you ready for some halfway-decent Obidala-smut?! I know I am! Let’s have at it, shall we? BTW, huge fan of the idea of Padme sneaking off to clubs and bars in disguise, if you can’t tell. And Obi in leather pants. HUGE fan of that one since I saw Velvet Goldmine. :D

This one obviously isn’t going on FFN… stupid smut-Nazis. I started reading smut when I was thirteen and look at me now! I’m perfectly fine! … Okay maybe not. Whatever. O.o

Oh plot, where hast thou gone? I’m takin’ a cue from The General’s Grrls on this one. Thank you for all the inspiration over the years, ladies. My hat’s off to you!

NC-17 below the cut. This is your only warning. Don't bitch if it scars you for life. Though I don't see why it would... I've certainly read/written worse... this is pretty mild compared to what it could be.

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Debating whether or not I should x-post to obiwan_padme . If any of you guys are reading, let me know if this is appropriate. I'll probably put it on The Obidala Network later as well.

Enjoy, review, etc. Why I ask these things of my stalkers I'll never know... Oh well. Namarie.

UPDATE @ 12:38am: Changed a line at Jacob's suggestion. Apparently my omniscient narrator and Obi-Wan's Force powers were conflicting. I need a beta, badly.