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Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:43 |
| http://docs.python.org/py3k/howto/webservers.html The path to the interpreter in the shebang (#!/usr/bin/env python) must be currect. Sorry man there are a great many distractions here. |
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Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:46 |
| In same file, "intermangled with Python” and it has a “Publisher” which destignates" intermingled? designates? Thanks, Dave. |
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| msg101616 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:48 |
| "Another problem ist the basic concept" is |
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| msg101617 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:53 |
| much easier as is is specially designed more easily and is especially designed |
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| msg101618 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) *  |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:55 |
| Some more typos: "The benefit from this approach is that WSGI applications can be deployed much easier as is is specially designed to host WSGI applications" s/is is/it is/ "Pylons is much like TurboGears with ab even" s/ab/an/ Once you finish reading it I'll fix them all at once. |
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| msg101619 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:55 |
| There is a number of middlewares are |
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| msg101620 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 01:57 |
| you can rely an already existing rely on an |
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| msg101621 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 02:47 |
| There is an incredible number of frameworks s/is/are/ The majority of users is best s/is/are/ o work together as good as possible. s/good/well/ jects can be saven in a st s/saven/saved/ Thank you. I'm through for now. |
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| msg101628 - (view) |
Author: Martin v. Löwis (loewis) * |
Date: 2010-03-24 08:20 |
| David, can you provide these changes as a unified diff against the subversion trunk? |
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| msg101639 - (view) |
Author: David W. Lambert (LambertDW) |
Date: 2010-03-24 15:45 |
| I apologize for the noise. Yes, I'll read the article carefully and provide changes as a unified diff against the subversion trunk. On Wed, 2010-03-24 at 08:20 +0000, Martin v. Löwis wrote: > Martin v. Löwis <martin@v.loewis.de> added the comment: > > David, can you provide these changes as a unified diff against the subversion trunk? > > ---------- > nosy: +loewis > > _______________________________________ > Python tracker <report@bugs.python.org> > <http://bugs.python.org/issue8218> > _______________________________________ |
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| msg101781 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-03-27 00:54 |
| See also #8234 that has a patch with some rephrasing too. |
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| msg101884 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 03:34 |
| Here is a patch that fixes the typos found by David and Yuv and rephrases a couple of parts. |
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| msg101895 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 16:24 |
| s/framewors/frameworks/g |
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| msg101896 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 16:34 |
| The rest of the patch seems good to me. Note that “the majority of users is” is as correct as “the majority of users are”, choosing one is a matter of preference. |
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| msg101897 - (view) |
Author: R. David Murray (r.david.murray) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 16:42 |
| 'is' may be technically correct, however it will sound wrong to a native speaker's ear, at least in America. |
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| msg101903 - (view) |
Author: Martin v. Löwis (loewis) * |
Date: 2010-03-29 20:32 |
| It seems that a lot of non-native speakers (of English) are participating in this thread. By nature, this is something that native speakers should resolve. Unless I'm mistaken (and Ezio actually *does* speak English as a first language), I propose that one of the native speakers provide a patch (perhaps based on Ezio's patch), and that all non-native speakers abstain from commenting on what they believe is English grammar. |
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| msg101912 - (view) |
Author: Brian Curtin (brian.curtin) * |
Date: 2010-03-30 02:24 |
| I went through and made a lot of grammar corrections and rewording throughout the file. See attached patch. I have no idea if this doc is technically correct. I only made grammar changes since I'm not a big web developer, but it could probably use a look from someone who is pretty knowledgeable on the topic. |
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| msg101913 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-03-30 02:43 |
| I noticed that “a user” is “he” in the current text; gender-neutral language may be more in conformity with the recent diversity statement. Regards |
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| msg101914 - (view) |
Author: Brian Curtin (brian.curtin) * |
Date: 2010-03-30 02:48 |
| My first patch removed a lot of the he/him/his wording, but now that you mentioned it found another one. Updated the patch. |
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| msg101917 - (view) |
Author: Aditya Bhargava (aditya.bhargava) |
Date: 2010-03-30 04:44 |
| Another patch. This contains all the patches from Brian Curtin's issue8218_v3.diff patch along with more edits, including an -> in teh -> the wordspushedtogether spaced out unnecessary _a_ words _is_ taken out |
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| msg102052 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:41 |
| There's also an invalid link to an image just after the title "The low-level view": -.. .. image:: http.png +.. image:: http.png The image is not there though, and in r66294 only the document has been added. |
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| msg102053 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:44 |
| This is a reST comment. |
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| msg102054 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:47 |
| If the image is missing, then the whole line can be removed. |
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| msg102055 - (view) |
Author: Éric Araujo (eric.araujo) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:49 |
| Is there a main author for this fileN? If so, they can say whether they left the link as a reminder to put the image back later, or if they were just afraid of real version control <0.4 wink> |
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| msg102056 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-01 01:52 |
| The author is Marek Kubica, but he doesn't seem to be registered to this tracker. |
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Author: R. David Murray (r.david.murray) * |
Date: 2010-04-03 17:38 |
| I do know something about web development, so I did a more extensive edit. I'm not saying I've brought it completely up to date or fixed any inaccuracies, but I did change the tone here and there, tightened up a bunch of the language, clarified a few things, and updated a few statements. |
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| msg102362 - (view) |
Author: Ezio Melotti (ezio.melotti) * |
Date: 2010-04-05 04:07 |
| Fixed in r79781 (trunk), r79782 (release26-maint), r79783 (py3k) and r79784 (release31-maint). Thanks to all! |
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