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I totally agree with the statement wich says that is better to attend a live performanc­e such as a play, concert or sporting event than to watch it on tv. When we talk about entertainm­ent moments there isn't anything better than participat­e with your soul and body and all witness that feeling around you from people who are doing the same thing as you. The biggest advantage of attend a live performanc­e is that you are feeling all the energy that the event has. Beyond that, you would fell more involved with what is happening in the event instead of only be seated in a chair at home with no emotions, as well as alone. For example, the last time I went watch the soccer game of my team I was in the mid of the all the spectators and there we jumped a lot, singled, screamed. It was really fun. One other reason for this is that you will be close to a lot of people who also is having the same emotions you are feeling. Moreover you can make a lot of new friends because the people who are present there might have close interests as you have as entertainm­ent likes. It can be in anyplace, can be a game of your club, the concert of your favorite band or a play of a political group. One example is the day I met one girl when I was at the concert of System of a Down, the girl also likes music groups I like, as well she liked my life style. Today she is my girlfriend. At long last it is always good to get out of your home sometimes. It is not good and not interestin­g to anyone live in the same routine every day. If you stay doing all your things always at home you will have a monotonous life: You won't meet new places, new people, and new things. It's better to move your body and get out of a place to discover the world out there. Last year when I went to a play, I found a good restaurant when I was leaving from there. Nowadays always i can I take my friend there, the dishes are awesome. Pursuant to these reasons I think that attend a live performanc­e event instead watch it on tv is so much better. This mentality can maintain you to not have a monotonous life and discover where there is the real fun.
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I, N., do conjure thee, O Spirit N., by the living God, by the true God, by the holy and all-ruling God, who created from nothingnes­s the heaven, the earth, the sea, and all

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