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Jane is a talented geography researcher. Her work concentrates on the transformation of continent. She also learning about contemporary literature as a hobby in her spare time.
Six month ago, she took part in a Chief Got Talent contest and won the first prize. The dish which helped her to be the winner all
consisted largely of vegetables and contained no fat.
Some conservative people don’t want to eat vegetarian dishes because they think that these dishes don’t provide enough energy for our body to be healthy. But that point is apparently wrong because there are a lot of vegetarian and they are still strong and healthy although they eat vegetarian dish every day.
After the constest, a idea just popped out of her mind. She recognized that many health-conscious consumers want to reduce fat in their consumed food and eating vegetarian food is the best choice. So she considered opening a vegetarian restaurant. Because she didn’t have any knowledge about how the business work so she consulted her best friend named Amy – also a owner of a famous restaurant – to get someadvices. After carefully consideration, she was confident to build her own restaurant.
Two months later after constant construction, the restaurant has finished. Every served dish comes from her restaurant is always fresh and delicious because all vegatables are kept in clean cool container to remain in good condition. All harmful substances don’t come into contact with these food. The number of customers has increased considerablely.
As a consequence, her restaurant has become famous recently.
“Eating vegetarian food and you will see a continuous improvement in your health. ” Jane said confidently in a BBC interview.
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