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A little boat with two people in quaint dress on board was gliding down river. Suddenly man gave oars to his female companion and jumped into the water. The woman plied hard to keep not moving and not to look beneath the surface of water. She was very nervous. Then smiling man appeared and coped to climb back to the boat. There were two tiny pink shells in his hands. Woman strove to smile and thank him for the present, but it was too obvious that she wasn't grateful at all.
Then man began to steer right to the shore. He still had enough hope to make appropriate gift for his princess. The fall wasn't far off, but luckily flowers hadn't withered yed. He plucked big bunch of daisies. She thanked him again and started to knit a wreath using a band from her dress.
Now she was more than just beautiful. She was a gorgeous queen with a crown. And he would carry out every edict she would make. Every.
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