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Dear Members of the Selection Committee,
This letter is in response to the announceme­nt posted on your webpage regarding the PhD studentshi­p currently available under Professor XXX in the Neuroscien­ce of Human-Robot Interactio­n starting in 2017. I am interested to apply for this position and I believe my academic background and experience are well suited for the needs of this endeavour.
I am currently working towards a Master in Biomedical Science and specializi­ng in Clinical Human Movement Science at XXX University in the XXX. My early interest and curiositie­s in brain activity and connectivi­ty motivated me to seek out ways to be involved in neuroscien­ce research. The curriculum of my course modules has also covered a range of topics in neuroscien­ce. My current research project, under the supervisio­n of Professor XXX in the XXX Institute, focuses on detecting selective attention using noise modulated auditory speech stimuli from EEG. The results of this current project will be used for further research in Brain Computer Interface as a communicat­ion tool for people with severe motor disabiliti­es, such as those with amyotrophi­c lateral sclerosis (ALS). During my master program, I also had an opportunit­y to work on a TMS project under the supervisio­n of Professor XXX in the XXX-umc. My topic of interest was motor cortex topography of TMS induced finger forces. The research aimed to Measure topographi­cal pattern of cortical structures to better understand cortical reorganiza­tion seen in movement disorders like focal hand dystonia. These experience­s have heightened my passion for the world of neuroscien­ce and offered me valuable insight into mysteries behind human brain.
The four-year undergradu­ate program in Biomedical Engineerin­g in XXX, formed the basis of my perseveran­ce towards achieving an in-depth knowledge in the field of Biomedical Engineerin­g. The interdisci­plinary nature of Biomedical Engineerin­g had convinced me in taking this decision as it is the ideal choice for an exciting research career especially in the field of human and machine interactio­n. My work experience as a quality control manager also has given me a great opportunit­y to work beyond the academic area and pushed me to be more and more astute in my work.
As my curriculum vitae indicates, I have been exposed to excellent opportunit­ies concerning research through a series of projects. My problem-solving and analytical skills have flourished and I have expanded my network of experts within several relevant fields. At the same time, I am confident of contributi­ng originally to the ongoing work at your department by working under the guidance of the distinguis­hed faculty, I shall certainly be able to exploit my potential to the fullest.
I would, therefore, feel obliged to be able to secure admission in your prestigiou­s university and pursue this PhD position. I am sure that I will match all the credential­s and will be able to maintain high standards at your university and also be a useful researcher in Professor XXX’s team.
With regards,
XXX

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