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Nowadays many people say that we live in the age of information technology and the Internet is as common as a telephone. However, others believe that the Internet is the evil of our time.
From my point of view, I suppose that the Internet offers people excellent opportunities for communication. To begin with, with the help of the Internet we have a chance to send an email to another country cheaper and quicker than a letter. Moreover, there is an opportunity to speak with friend and relatives living abroad almost free of charge as we only must pay for the Internet connection. What is more, we can find friends who share our interests from all over the world.
On the other hand, many people say that there is always a danger of teenagers getting addicted to the Internet. For example, young people spend all their free time on the Net neglecting their homework and duties. Another concern is a lack of privacy as hackers can read your emails or steal some private information.
Nevertheless, I strongly believe that the Internet is no more addictive than watching TV or playing computer games. The Internet helps us to do our homework better and quicker. Furthermore, the progress in software development will help us to keep our private information safe from interference.
To summarize, despite of criticism and fears of many people we have to recognize that the Internet has changed our life for better and we should make the best use of it.
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