This programm is an excellent opportunity for me.. - text for correction (proofreading) from user loicl (original) (raw)
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This programm is an excellent opportunity for me to travel, discover a new country and to spend good time and work on the same time.
It is also a great way to improve my English, my CV, to meet new people and to gain experience in different matter.
Working with children is a chance to help them, to give them some advice and in another time to learn a lot of things. And I would really enjoy to work in a team, and show how team spirit is important, and sport is an excellent way to learn that!
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I don't have any 'professional experience' with children, but I'm used to take care and entertain children between 6 - 12 years old, in different activities like skiing, or outdoor games like playing soccer or riding bike. Most of the time, I manage activities with my two little brothers aged of 6 & 7 and some of their friends, or with my little cousins during family meeting, which means entertain 8 children between 5 and 14 years old. I really enjoy it and make them having a good time!
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I practice cycling in differents form, road cycling since 1 years, alone or with a friend, and 1/2 times by week. My longest outing is 150 km but I used to make some 30-60 km outgoing.
I'm also comfortable in mountain bike, which I used to practice in summer, taking a cable car up with the bike, and ride down the mountain.
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I've a lot of practice in football, I've been playing it during 8 years in a team, from 7 to 14. I'm still playing soccer with friends, for fun, but not in an 'official team' anymore. More than the basics skills I've, I'm really interested in the strategic part of this game, and by the links created between people by sport, and football in particular. The spirit of the game based on the fair play and the team spirit are also some values which I appreciate and enjoy, and may would enjoy to teach!
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I've practiced tennis during 5 years, from 14 to 18, and make a little break due to my studies. I was playing often, 2/3 times by week, including training lesson in a tennis club.
To show how I enjoy this sport, my saturday was organized like this: 9 a. m to 6 p. m playing with friends and having training! I've the basics skills of this sport, including the differents notions of strategic ( body position while playing, attitude to adopt... ) then, I'm able to leads or to assist someone. : )
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I don't have a real experience in riflery but I've practiced ' biathlon', which is cross-country skiing and rifle shooting, a dozens of time, and I'm aware of the security process when using a rifle. Another complementary experience is a sport called 'airsoft' which I practiced sometimes with friends.
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