How Do I Address People Who Work for the City but Were Not Elected?Dear Mr. Hickey:I will be addressing envelopes to municipal officials and would like to do that correctly. Please tell me how to address the administrator of utilities or engineer for the municipality. Thanks much. _--- Vicki Cassidy_Dear Ms. Cassidy: Anyone who is appointed or simply hired for their job -- which (I am assuming) includes an engineer or administrator -- is addressed as: Mr./Ms./Dr./whatever (full name) (Title of office held) Address Only elected officials and judges are addressed as "the Honorable" -- Robert HickeyHow To Address an Acting County Administrator? What is the proper form of address in a letter to an Acting County Administrator? It is an appointed (un-elected) position. Also, should the salutation be Dear Madame Administrator, Dear Madame Acting Administrator, Dear Ms. Administrator or what? -- Beverly Shaw, Russell City, CaliforniaDear Ms. Shaw: I cover this on page 200 in my book, but here is the quick answer. This appointed official is most formally addressed: Ms. (Name) and identified by her position: Acting County Administrator Acting officials don't get to use the honorifics of an office ... they are just identified as "the acting." E.g., an acting governor is not addressed as Governor (Name). I would not use Madame Administrator in any context. I don't think I've ever encountered a County/City Administrator, County/City Manager, or County/City Board Member who used their office as their honorific. Sometimes a Chairman of a Board or Council is addressed as Chairman (name) in the context of their duties ... but it's more situational -- for clarity -- than official. And yes ... Commissioners do tend to be addressed as Mr./Madame Commissioner and Commissioner (name). So, back to your official. On an envelope and address block write: Ms. (Full Name) Acting County Administrator Address And in the salutation write: Dear Ms. (surname) -- Robert HickeyHow to Address the Mayor and City Council? What is the proper salutation when addressing a Mayor and multiple city council members in the same letter? Do I write? Honorable John Smith and Athens City Council Members OR Mayor John Smith and Athens City Council Members.Then as a salutation: Dear Mayor Smith and Athens City Council Members? I have to have the letter for signature in the morning, and it's my first day on the job. -- Thank you, Tonyalee in AthensDear Tonyalee: It would be best to address a letter to actual officials rather than addressing one by name and the others by their office. I'd prefer you address it to the Mayor (by name) and find out the names of the members of the City Council so you could use them. BUT trying to answer what you've asked with the info you provide .... Here's a nice optionENVELOPE and ADDRESS BLOCK on the letter The Honorable John Smith, Mayor of Athens and Members of the Athens City Council Athens City Hall 301 College Avenue Athens, State, ZIP Note: For symmetry, Athens mentioned in both name/titlesSALUTATION Dear Mayor Smith and Members of the City Council: Note: For symmetry, Athens mentioned in neither _-- Robert Hickey_Hi Robert, Well, I finally got the word to send out those letters with the Mayoral and City Council Members salutation. The best part of the story, is that my boss came to me to ask if I was sure I had the proper salutations? And of course, I gave her a very broad smile, and as I printed out your answer, I explained how wonderful you were to reply to my email. Of course she was delighted with me....and you! She took the printout and I assume went to her boss with the backup proof. The letters were sent on Thursday. Thank you! Tonyalee How to Address a City Council Member? I am sending a letter to each City Councilmen individually not as a group. How do I address Sue Smith, who is a member of the City Council?? -- Kitty Anderson, Jacksonville, FloridaDear Ms. Anderson: Anyone in the US who is elected to public office is addressed as the Honorable. Members of the a city council are usually most formally addressed as Mr./Ms./etc. ... but are frequently addressed as Councilman (name), or in Jacksonville they use Council Member (name). So a letter would be: The Honorable Sue Smith Member, Jacksonville City Council 117 West Duval St., Suite 425 Jacksonville, FL 32202 Salutation would be: Dear Council Member Smith: -- Robert HickeyHow to Address a Retired Police Officer or Fire Fighter? How would you address a retired county or municipal police officer or fire fighter? Would you follow the same rules as one would with retired armed services officials since many public safety organizations are para-military and follow a similar rank structure as our armed services? Would it be proper to use LAPD Captain Robert Esposito, (Retired) -- ALRDear ALR, If a police officer in the police or fire department wants to continue using his/her rank it's totally at his/her preference. In speaking to some Police organizations they tell me that sometimes retired officials DO use their ranks in the context of "being a retired officer" (e.g., at a retired officer's meeting) ... and they may use is socially among friends and family. But if they take another job they DON'T use their rank in a civilian work situation. This is the same as the armed services which prohibit retired personnel from using ranks or ratings at another form of work. You can't have a retired Air Force officer now working for Boeing, selling planes to the Air Force and wanting to be addressed by rank! And detectives often don't use their rank at any time not wanting to draw attention to their work. In terms of style, the name would be written on official documents like this Captain Robert Esposito, LAPD Retired or Captain Robert Esposito, LAPD Ret. These are the forms all the style manuals use for official mail. Neither "LAPD" nor the "Retired" is noted on social correspondence. -- Robert HickeyHow to List an Elected Official in a Program? How does one list the governor or the mayor in a program for an event at which they will be speaking. I found the forms of address in you book, but just not sure if that's what I should use on a program? -- Susan in HonoluluDear Susan: Use this formula: 1) list by name 2) identify by office**(Program)** Welcome Remarks The Honorable Linda Lingle, Governor of the State of Hawaii The Honorable Mufi Hannemann, Mayor of the City and County of Honolulu _-- Robert Hickey_Robert, I don't think it's necessary to list their offices. Everyone will know who they are. O.K? -- Susan in HonoluluDear Susan: You are right, sometimes offices are not included because those present may know who Linda Lingle and Mufi Hanneman are. But programs also serve as keepsakes and as a record of the event. Often to include / not to include offices, date, year, and location are made with posterity in mind. How to Address the Clerk of a City Council? I am sending our Annual Report to the Clerks of the City Councils of the surrounding cities. How would I address the envelope and the greeting in the letter? _-- Janine Steele_Dear Ms. Steele: Usually clerks are appointed. If they are appointed ... then on the envelope they are: Mr./Ms. (full name) Clerk of (insert the name of the body here) (Address) and the salutation is: Dear Mr./Ms. (surname): -- Robert Hickey How to Address a Member of a School Board? When addressing a letter or writing a salutation of a letter, is a member of school board addressed as “The Honorable”? _-- P. Green_Dear P. Green: School boards -- if elected -- are technically eligible, but whether they do or don’t is by local tradition: Where I grew up in Arlington, Virginia the school boare doesn't use "The Honorable" .... I now live in New York City where they do. Call your school board and find out what's the tradition in your town. -- Robert Hickey How to Address a Letter to The Mayor? Dear Mr. Hickey: I need to write a letter to our Mayor. How do I address the envelope? When I met him I called him Mayor Neville, which is what everyone calls him. --- Renee Montgomery Dear Ms. Montgomery: In conversation, either Mr. Mayor or Mayor (surname) is good. Mr. Mayor is the more formal option since using just the title of an office is always the most formal**.** Address the envelope line-for-line like this: The Honorable (full name) Mayor of (city) Address Open the letter with the salutation: Dear Mr. Mayor: Or as I mentioned, a slightly less formal option would be: Dear Mayor (surname): Close the letter with: Sincerely, Renee Montogomery -- Robert HickeyHow to Address an Envelope to a Mayor and His Wife? How does one address the envelope of an invitation to the mayor of a city and his wife? -- Susan HensleyDear Ms. Hensley: I cover how to all sorts of elected officials and their spouses in Chapter Nine: Joint Forms of Address. You didn't tell me the names ... so depending those ... there are several options. If she uses "Mrs." and uses the same last name ... then traditionally her first name does not appear: The Honorable William Stanton and Mrs. Stanton (Address) This is the form the White House would use for a married couple using the same last name. The rule is not to break up "The Honorable" from "(name)" What you want to avoid is: The Honorable and Mrs. William Stanton (Address) If she uses a different last name, then her first name does appear, e.g.: The Honorable Alan Greenspan and Ms. Andrea Mitchell (Address) If she has her own rank, courtesy title, or some special honorific, then her first name does appear: The Honorable William Stanton and Lieutenant Linda Stanton (Address) The Honorable William Stanton and Dr. Linda Stanton (Address) The Honorable William Stanton and the Reverend Linda Stanton (Address) Probably more answer than you wanted ... but I hope that is useful. -- Robert Hickey |